I'm pasting a second copy of this statement with suggestions:
KEEP IN MIND THE TENSE OF VERBS.. i suggest you use the present tense!
Photography would have to be is my most preferred means of self-expression. Pictures
I obtain a deeper understanding of the world around me by getting closer and paying careful attention to detail. I tend to look for the fragments of life that the average eye might not see. My aspiration is to capture the wonders of the earth and take them with me wherever I go.
While I love to take pictures which are completely candid, lately I have been interested in doing the am approaching my work completely opposite. I want to pursue this idea of creating scenes which question the human psyche. Philosophy and psychology have always had an impact on my life and from that has been reflected in my work.
I want to tap into people’s<>
conscious and unconscious minds. I want to examine emotion that is educed by a traumatic events or that which may come from being introduced to a newborn baby. Perhaps adding a theatrical element to my work is what I’m really looking for. (this is interesting but not appropriate for an artist statement---unless asked for, discuss your current work in your artist statement, for example, "In my work, I tap into my audienc'es conscious mind through using photographs that stage traumatic events" )
Photography would have to be my most preferred means of self-expression. Pictures allow me to better understand my existence and my reality. I obtain a deeper understanding of the world around me by getting closer and paying careful attention to detail. I tend to look for the fragments of life that the average eye might not see. My aspiration is to capture the wonders of the earth and take them with me wherever I go.
While I love to take pictures which are completely candid, lately I have been interested in doing the complete opposite. I want to pursue this idea of creating scenes which question the human psyche. Philosophy and psychology have always had an impact on my life and from that has been reflected in my work. I want to tap into people’s conscious and unconscious minds. I want to examine emotion that is educed by a traumatic events or that which may come from being introduced to a newborn baby. Perhaps adding a theatrical element to my work is what I’m really looking for.